I'm drawing a comic book for a project and I wanted to know if someone could correct these sentences for me since it's quite complex to translate. Would they be correct? thanks in advance!.
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"I call upon the relentless whirlwind, across the void, release the path through the storm, beyond the eternal shadows" = "Ego voco super immitis tempestas, per vacuum, dimisit iter per tempestas, quam umbra in aeternum"
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I call upon the relentless whirlwind, across the void,
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"I call upon the relentless whirlwind, across the void, release the path through the storm, beyond the eternal shadows" = "Ego voco super immitis tempestas, per vacuum, dimisit iter per tempestas, quam umbra in aeternum"
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I call upon the relentless whirlwind, across the void,